Hw#21b-Comments

Raven

Raven i thought your blog was very insightful. I liked how you were in depth about all 8 things that you said about what Beth said. Two things that stood out to me was how you thought maybe that old feelings would start up when she talked about her husband but she didn't which is also what i thought about cause usually when you talk about a past family member mostly likely we would cry but she didn't at all. Another part was when you said "life is too short to hold onto grudges and dislike we may have for other people. I move past the mistakes I’ve made and I allow those mistakes to shape me", i agree with, i think that if we do hold those grudges and don't move on that can haunt us and we won't grow up as a person. Overall your post was aligned with the assignment and i like how yu referred back to your own life.

Michelle

I really enjoyed your post. The second paragraph talking about basically our time management and how us teens nowadays get distracted by it with digital things because its true. Each insight that you talked about comparing to Beth's comments were very in depth and you sumed up everything very well. One of the things i took away from your post was "at times in my life I enjoy letting myself be swallowed by my own thoughts and visions and not being able to do this terrifies me" it felt like something i would think about myself because it happens to me often as well.

This is what i wrote on Raven's blog:

Raven i thought your blog was very insightful. I liked how you were in depth about all 8 things that you said about what Beth said. Two things that stood out to me was how you thought maybe that old feelings would start up when she talked about her husband but she didn't which is also what i thought about cause usually when you talk about a past family member mostly likely we would cry but she didn't at all. Another part was when you said "life is too short to hold onto grudges and dislike we may have for other people. I move past the mistakes I’ve made and I allow those mistakes to shape me", i agree with, i think that if we do hold those grudges and don't move on that can haunt us and we won't grow up as a person. Overall your post was aligned with the assignment and i like how yu referred back to your own life.

This is what i wrote on Michelle's blog:

I really enjoyed your post. The second paragraph talking about basically our time management and how us teens nowadays get distracted by it with digital things because its true. Each insight that you talked about comparing to Beth's comments were very in depth and you sumed up everything very well. One of the things i took away from your post was "at times in my life I enjoy letting myself be swallowed by my own thoughts and visions and not being able to do this terrifies me" it felt like something i would think about myself because it happens to me often as well.