Bianca, I enjoyed reading your post. I liked how you talked about the women's appearance and how they responded answering your questions. One part stood out to me when you talked about your mother about the pain she was having which brought her closer to you in the womb and her starting a new life with a new child. I like how you mention that having a child could possibly bring family together because I think that happens with my family often. We have kids and then we become closer as a whole and forget the other negativity in our life but focus on the baby. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more.
Abdul, Wow I thought all three of your stories were very touching. I enjoyed all of them. I like how each of them told a different story from different views within your family. I like how you talked about your mom having to raise a child all on her own. She is a strong woman. I thought it was funny when she said that she missed the attention she got when she was pregnant. In your second story I like how bascially it was the complete opposite and how both the mother and the father put both equal efforts which I believe how it should be. The mother shouldn't have to go through that alone. The third story about your aunt was intriguing I never heard a story like that before. Its unlikely you hear something like this often. I liked how you said "she made a full recovery and went out to successfully give birth 2 years after." That's is very tough but she was able to make it throught it.
Young Person (Jenny),
Leah,I thought your post was cool. I liked how you talked about your sister's birth compared to your birth. You can tell the differences your mom did from before to now. My favorite lines were when you said your mom "I was young and it was a learning experience". She was learning about her own pregnancy as everything was coming along. I didn't think about pregnancy before. It kind makes me want to know about my birth.
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